Sunday, 22 September 2013

The qualities of a good student - SOFEA

  The qualities of a good student.


Introduction
 
General Statements
In this advanced world, education is an aspect, which has been stressed on more and more. From the moment an individual is sent to school to acquire knowledge, he or she will spend many years learning. This complicated process of acquiring knowledge in various fields is a time-consuming and arduous task. Therefore, the label 'a good student' is not easy to live up to.
 
Thesis Statement 
So, what are the qualities of a good student want to be ?
Body
 
Topic sentence 1
A good student has to diligent and committed to learning.
 
Supporting details
As the old saying goes, "We live in and learn". No matter who, where, what or when, a good student stays focused and is not afraid to question. A good student is able to learn and apply skills, which are taught directly and indirectly, in or outside the classroom. He has the ability to access the information given and the initiative to further research the topics taught in school. 
 
Topic sentence 2
A good student has high morale.
 
Supporting details
Moral values such as kindness, compassion and consideration are always put into practice in his daily life. He will always be prepared to do his duty as a civic-minded person to ensure the cleanliness of his surroundings. Moreover, he is courteous and always lends a hand to the sick and needy. He is humble and always learns from his past wrongdoings. A good student is a cheerful student too. He always greets the world with an optimistic frame , of mind and smiles at people he meets everyday. Besides, he will willingly teach those who are slow and enlighten those who are in the dark. He provides a shoulder for his peers to cry on and lends an ear to any problems. A good student is a student who is not only caring but also amiable and accessible to all.
 
Topic sentence 3
A good student leads an active and healthy lifestyle too.
 
Supporting details
He is not the `bookworm" pouring pouring over his studies day in and day out. Taking part in extra curricular activities is part and parcel of a good student's life. He exercises regularly and has a balanced diet.
 
 
CONCLUSION


Summarise main points/restate thesis statement
A good student has to be good in many aspects.
 
Final comment 
He has to be able to manage his time and live a healthy, happy and satisfying life. Although no student in this world is a perfect student, the ideal student has to be able to study smart.
    

Saturday, 21 September 2013

The Qualities Of A Good Friend. -syazana

The Qualities of a Good Friend
Introduction

General Statements
Friendship is an important aspect of the human experience and is in many ways essential to a persons emotional health. We have all types of friends, but good friends are that we always depend on and appreciate the happy moments we spend together. The encourage when one is sad, entertain when one is lonesome, and listen when one has problems. Friends play an important role in a person's life. A good friend can last a lifetime.

Thesis Statement
So, what are the qualities that we need to see in person to be considered a good friend ?

Body

Topic sentence 1
Honesty is one of the most valuable trait to have good friends.

Supporting details
Honesty is absolutely essential to maintaining a friendship. If you can't trust your friends to tell you the truth, they shouldn't be your friends. By doing so, the friendship will not be based on lies or of distrust. 

Topic sentence 2
A good friend cares for us and is concerned for our welfare.

Supporting details
A good friend always expect the best for us. He was one of us will be able to shre our joys and sorrows. A good friend who provides a shoulder to cry when we are stressed we are. For example, we always feel better after pouring out our problems and concerns to our good friend. 

Topic sentence 3
A good friend is a loyal and truthful person.

Supporting details
He will not speak badly of us behind our backs or back-stab us. He will always support us no matter what happens. He is not a traitor and definitely not malicious. Good friends are also truthful to each other. There will not be any lies between good friends. This quality is extremely important as lies can lead to trouble and strain a close relationship.

Topic sentence 4
A good friend who also share the same interests and perspectives of life.

Supporting details
It makes people closer and closer to one another. They spend a lot of time together pursue their interests. They hold the same views in life. This is what makes them get along well.

Topic sentence 5
A good friend is a person that we tell our innermost feelings and deepest secrets.

Supporting details
A good friend will not tell our secrets. He would not spread rumors about us. I think the quality is maintained lifelong friendships. For example, he tells the story of the man of her dreams to be close to it.

Conclusion

Summarise main points
Maintain a cheerful demeanour and always be yourself.

Final comment
Love is another important aspect for longevity in friendship. After becoming friends with someone for years they have become like family to you. The following features I expect to find in a friend. Hopefully, everyone is blessed with good friends so that the world becomes a more beautiful place to live.

The Advantages of Studying Overseas - Eyka


INTRODUCTION

General Statements
Nowadays, studying abroad has become popular. Every year, lots of parents are trying their best to send their children overseas to complete their studying. Most people may think that it is better to further their studies in overseas country than in their own country

Thesis Statement
there are many advantages of studying overseas.

BODY

Topic sentence 1
Start making the most out of your everyday and become a full-time learner.

Supporting Details
Traveling outside the United States will be an education in itself. There's no need to limit yourself to a classroom; while studying abroad you will be able to become a 24/7 student, from the student lounge to the city streets. Study abroad for a few weeks or a year; don't let time constraints hold you back, just work around them. Many students who go abroad report that, in addition to enjoying and learning in their weekly classes, they learned some of the most valuable lessons outside of the classroom. Weekend excursions to museums and cultural sites add to your academic and personal growth. While in a foreign country, even mundane activities like shopping for groceries become an educational adventure.

Topic sentence 2
Become fluent in another language.

Supporting Details
For those of us who have toiled at learning another language, we know the way to truly become fluent in a language is to be immersed in it. If you've studied a language for several years and wish to gain fluency in that language, studying abroad is a vital way to make that wish come true. Even if you haven't studied languages at all, many programs don't require any previous foreign language. They also offer intensive language courses alongside English classes, or as the core purpose of the study abroad program.

Topic sentence 3
Improve your academic, professional and financial potential

Supporting Details
International experience is a critical and impressive part of any resume. In addition to the personal growth you'll undergo while overseas, the international and cross-cultural interpersonal skills you'll develop will certainly expand your employment opportunities and, consequently, your income potential in our increasingly globalized society. Globally-minded employees are in high demand. Many companies seek out individuals with multi-lingual and multi-cultural experience and skills.

CONCLUSION

Summarise main points/restate thesis statement
The things above are the most important and valuable advantages that have found.

Final comment
And of course there are much more than what mentioned. If you have hesitation to study in foreign countries, just take action and you will find that your great future is not far away!

Saturday, 14 September 2013

Reasons Why Many Teenagers Commit Crimes- EIFFAH

Introduction


General Statements
Crime happens daily in every part of the world. Everybody in the world commits crime or sin in some way, shape, or form. The daily news and newspaper articles most often contain stories of crime, such as theft, murder, assaults, and most importantly, war crimes. People persistently conduct absurd behaviors and activities, as well as violate social norms in society. A few examples of these absurd behaviors and activities include a Mesa mother, whom attempted to trade her baby for a gun, a robbery at a Sparkle Car Wash, and an attempted robbery at Wal-Mart by an eighty-three-year-old elderly. 

Thesis Statement
There is a reason for these absurd behaviors of human beings. However, these reasons are not necessarily easy to define, since each criminal behave with their own distinct and strange motives. To understand the psychological or sociological theory of crimes, one must delve further into the aspects and backgrounds of a criminal.

Body

Topic Sentence 1
 Generally, people commit crimes because of impoverished environment surroundings, low financial or social status, and poor or corrupt judgment, as in white-collar crimes.

Supporting Details
Foremost, a recent questionnaire from Mesa Community College students may further explain the reasons for crimes. The following are a graph of the results from the questionnaire:

The results conclude that males are more likely than female to commit crimes. However, both male and female would commit a crime if that individual knew they would evade arrest. Both genders are also not vastly religious. Both genders are likely to succumb to bad influence from people who smoke, drink, or do drugs. The graph does not present results that include other open questions. Instead, there were careful observation and notes on these results; males are less compassionate than females are with their relationships with family members at home. Males and females are equally successful academically at MCC. Although, males and females tend to succumb to bad influences during their childhood life, males are slightly keener to succumb to such influences. These results took place on the campus of Mesa Community College among 30 random students between the ages of 19-25.

Topic Sentence 1
First of all, an environment can play a huge role in a person’s behavior and attitude. A person growing up in an environment full of criminal activities, while constantly being exposed to those activities are more likely to behave similarly.

Supporting Details
On the contrary, a person growing up in an environment surrounded by Christians and religious neighbors are more likely to go to church or conduct good deeds. An example of a stimulating-type environment towards an individual is peer pressure. People who are constantly around friends that abuse drug substances and alcohol will most likely start abusing drugs and alcohol themselves. Many people who do give in to peer-pressure see the actions as a way to fit in and become a part of a group or clique. Most individuals consider being in a clique as part of a family. In addition, it is easy to become victim to peer pressure because it is especially difficult to turn down an offer from a friend. In the media, children who play violent videos or watch R rated television and movies are more likely to succumb to violence. To simplify this finding, the more exposure to violence a teenager receives, the more aggressive he or she may become. In fact, child abuse or abuse in relationships is a major factor for aggressive crimes, such as assault or murder. However, there certainly are exceptions to this finding. Adults that encourage their children by teaching them right from wrong may see violence as wrong. This exception requires a supportive authority figure to educate and instruct children to become a well-behaved individual. Thus, the environment surrounding that a person grows up in can truly determine what type of person he or she may develop.

Topic Sentence 2
Furthermore, why do people still commit crimes when he or she acknowledges the risk of punishment involved? Most of the time, the risks of crime outweighs the benefits.

Supporting Details
However, criminals believe differently. Many criminals feel that committing a crime, such as stealing or robbery is the only way out of poverty. They feel that their responsibility to feed his or her family is a moral and honorable matter. Bank robbers and thieves commit crimes to feed their family. They steal because they are lazy and unmotivated. Others steal because they want to save money. These criminals may feel trapped and overwhelmed with life that they have nowhere else to turn to but crime. An individual going through stress may be consequence from a loss of job, relationship abuse, insufficient income, or daily hassles. A person with low financial and social status may feel recluse and alone in the world. However, people who commit street crimes are generally not poor, but middle class people. In fact, street criminals have an income that is close to if not average to the average American income. Poor people are more intelligent to decide against committing crime. Poor or homeless individuals have an understanding that they have practically nothing left in the world; it would be ridicule to take any risk of committing a crime because it would be equivalent to tossing their life away.

Topic Sentence 3
Moreover, for wealthy, intelligent criminals, money is a major factor for frauds and identity theft. In fact, identity theft is a massive financial problem for victims. Drug and alcohol abuse is another huge factor in crimes. The study shows that drug abuse emits feelings of anger and hostility.

Supporting Details
 Moreover, what is an easy and quick way to make lots of money? Drug dealing is the answer for a risky, but profitable way of living. However, not many criminals go far in the business of drug dealing. Police officers incarcerate drug dealers and drug traffickers all around the world. They are intelligent in arresting drug addicts and criminals mainly because of their experience in detecting drugs. Are poor people more likely to commit crimes than rich people are? It is easy to assume that the answer to this question is yes, but that would be incorrect. If the crimes are street crimes, then the answer would be yes, but the question is considering all crimes, therefore the answer is most definitely no.

Topic Sentence 4
Moreover, people of the low class do not necessarily cause crimes, nor do they cause the most crimes. Statistics have revealed that crimes, such as stealing, theft, or robbery are the most committed street crimes and the less challenging for authorities to capture individuals who commit them.

Supporting Details
 However, rich and upper class people commit the most challenging crimes for authority to take into custody; these crimes are white-collar crimes. White-collar crime is a rising concern that is widely ignored throughout the world. Rich people make poor judgment by ignoring and violating safety rules or by enacting their own set of harmful policies that will increase the risks of killing employees. However, it is extremely difficult to arrest criminals of white-collar crimes because the criminals, themselves, may suggest that they had no knowledge about the safety rules implied.

Topic Sentence 5
Furthermore, people who steal most likely took the opportunity that was available.

Supporting Details
 A murderer may kill because of hatred, resentment, or anger. A thief may steal because of financial issues, laziness, or other sociological and psychological problems. An opportunity to steal is when an individual attempts to steal only when an authority figure is unaware or not present during the thieves’ actions. For example, shoplifters attempt to steal only when there are no workers or customers nearby. Given the opportunity, anybody is capable of committing crime. In the cases of street crimes, this statistic is true. Murder, robbery, theft are definitions of street crime.

Conclusion
In conclusion, if an individual knows that he or she will evade arrest, that individual will most likely commit crime. In that moment, only the individual have the courage and confidence to commit a certain crime. An individual may feel confident in their abilities to thrive and escape, while outweighing both the risks and benefits on the situation. A criminal may or may not weight the outcomes before committing a crime. Intelligent criminals plan a crime beforehand, while other crimes are an act in the heat of passion. Sometimes, criminals do not outweigh the costs; they are just unconcerned whatsoever about the consequences that can transpire. Teenagers and other individuals commit street crimes because they want to be different. Crimes, such as street racing, auto thefts, and graffiti can be joyous for individuals. Other more serious crimes are committed in the heat of passion. In the moment of a murder, the murderer does not think before acting. Crime may be committed out of the ordinary, without any thought or it may be committed with great consideration, as in most robberies; however each criminal commit’s a crime for their own purpose. These purposes are extremely difficult to define and explain. It is best to the leave the question “why?” for criminals to explain during their court trials and their stay in prison.

Tuesday, 20 August 2013

verbs - eyka

Afiq bounces back to win in South Korea
PETALING JAYA: Malaysian driver Afiq Ikhwan Yazid finally had something to celebrate after spending his Hari Raya and birthday on a racing track. 
Afiq, who turned 22 on Saturday, finished out of the podium in Race 12 of the Formula Masters China Series at the Inje Auto Theme Park in South Korea in the morning. Afiq remains the overall leader with 131 points but his lead has been reduced to just three points by 
Meritus GP team-mate and Aidan Wright. Malaysia’s Akash Nandy is third on 102 points
But the Petronas talent development driver bounced back to win Round 3 of the Lamborghini Super Trofeo Series in the afternoon. 
Afiq made good use of his third qualifying spot in the Super Trofeo Series to take the chequered flag in 50:15.499. It was Afiq’s second consecutive win, having emerged triumphant at the Sepang International Circuit last month.
South Korean Ryu Si-won finished second, 45.308 seconds adrift. Italian Max Wiser grabbed third spot after clocking 51:09.078.
“It was a very difficult weekend with the Formula Masters and Lamborghini Super Trofeo races being held together. Thankfully, I managed to pull off a win in the Super Trofeo Series,” said Afiq. 
“We still have a lot of work to do as the next round of the Formula Masters will be held in Sepang (from Sept 13-15). It’s my home race and I hope to strengthen my championship lead there,” said Afiq.


http://www.thestar.com.my/Sport/Motorsport/2013/08/11/Podium-finish-for-Afiq.aspx



Action verbs 
Regular 
-Turn, turned
-Finish, finished
-Reduce, reduced
-Bounce, bounced
-Grab, grabbed
-Manage, managed
Irregular 
-Make, made
-Say, said
Transitive 
-spending his Hari Raya and birthday on a racing track
intransitive
-I hope to strengthen my championship lead
- Max Wiser grabbed third spot
Non-action verbs
Linking verbs
-Petronas talent development driver bounced back to win Round 3
‘be’ verbs
-finally had something to celebrate
-It was Afiq’s second consecutive win
-“It was a very difficult weekend

Monday, 19 August 2013

Verb -syazana



Example
Action Verbs

Regular
  •  Appoint, appointed, appointed
  •    Name, named, named
  •   Say, said, said
  •  Launch, launched, launched
  •  Use, used, used
  •   Hold, held, held
  •  Aim, aimed, aimed
  •  Cure, cured, cured
  •  Boost, boosted,boosted

Irregular
  •  Choose, chose, chosen
  •  Show, showed, shown


Transitive

Intransitive

Non-action Verbs
Linking verbs

‘Be’ Verbs  
  •  Datuk Lee Chong Wei has been appointed as Robust Vitality Ambassador by CNI.
  •  He was also named spokesman for several companies.
  •   He said Chong Wei was chosen as the ambassador due to his healthy and vibrant image.
  •  Which has long been used by the indigenous people.
  •  Among the prizes are a seven-day.
  •  Sales points are taking part in the campaign.


Auxiliary Verbs